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ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK


March 4-5, 2006

Clay dolls
have become my friends
demure hina


--Tatsuko Toshima (Aomori)
Maiko on the run
like wind on summer days
... glimpsed but never seen


--Thomas Canull (Indiana)
Daruma
doll sits on the gate
marbled rock


--Michael Corr (Nagoya)
Maybe dolls
wish to talk to me
spring twilight


--Satoru Kanematsu (Nagoya)
Girls festival:
Mom strokes the flawed doll
in quintet


--Yutaka Kitajima (Niigata)
Chopping board
a budding garlic
for the earth


--Yoriko Tashiro (Kagoshima)
Rumor of spring:
my daughter's doll
wears new clothes


--Vasile Moldovan (Romania)
Careful
under these pines
dogwoods


--John Martone (Illinois)
Full winter moon yearns
clouds on branches touch her face
the unloved feels cold


--Jennifer Tan (Ontario)


from the notebook

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MITSUAKI KOJIMA

Haikuists control their passion when composing haiku. In the first haiku in the column dedicated to the Doll Festival in Japan (Hina Matsuri) Tatsuko Toshima implies she neither had a hina doll nor ever really was interested by them: Simple clay dolls are her preferred playmates.

mourning dove
it's been months

What was not written by John Martone on the third line of the above haiku might resonate with many readers. His poem was penned as a six-syllable two-line poem. The next poem composed in Coventry, England, by K.P. Turner adheres to a more traditional 3-line format spread over 3-5-3 syllables. Turner employs a dash on the first line, whereas Thomas Canull uses ellipsis to represent words unsaid at the beginning of his third line.

Her footprints--
hidden overnight
by fresh snow

Tea ceremony
quiet moment lost in time
... essence of friendship

Andrew Grossman combines haiga, artwork, with his haiku such as the next one about the modern work environment. He writes that his interest has turned overseas "to bring the work of Middle Eastern poets to the attention of American readers." His poem is followed by one by Ali Miyazawa who has retired from a job that took him around the world. Going by the pen name Ali Miyaz, to appear more Arabic, he says that he is relearning the Koran by reading its translations in Japanese and English.

sunset;
a day
at my desk

Struck by flint
flags burning in spring
cartoon friends

While watching the Winter Olympics from her home in Nagoya, Barbara Casterline couldn't help feeling the pull of the shiny moon, "It's always strange to remember that we share the same full moon." Writing from Chiba, Reiko Nishimura similarly waxes poetic under the new moon.

Turin snow
February moon
gleams here too

February
as subtle as new moon
newborn smile

Haiku poets Tenshi and Yushi Sakai combined translated haiku and a gallery of photos taken around the world into "Haiku to Shashin to HAIKU" printed Jan. 1, 2006, by Nihonbungakukan. Several of their poems have been published before in the Asahi Haikuist Network. The addition of photographs by these world travelers heightens the visual element for readers.

Shunshu ya kamoku no hihi no yo o ureu
spring sorrow
a baboon worries
for the world

Haru no hi no kao hanbun ni kage tsukuru
rays of spring
a half of each face
in shadow

Lee Gurga, the editor of "Modern Haiku," rekindled the issue of whether it is possible to compose haiku in a language other than Japanese, when he spoke to members of Haiku International Association in Tokyo. His speech included haiku by Canadian LeRoy Gorman and by former U.S. poet laureate Billy Collins.

Last slow dance
winter flies
couple on the bar

Mid-winter evening
alone at the sushi bar--
just me and this eel

Want to try composing haiku ?

Back numbers

The next issue of the Asahi Haikuist Network appears March 18. Readers are invited to send haiku to David McMurray at the International Herald Tribune/Asahi Shimbun 5-3-2 Tsukiji, Tokyo, 104-8011, or by fax to 03-5541-8539. -END-

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